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From: jwgh at earthlink.net (Jacob Haller)
Subject: Re: Dark Angel's Embrace - Poetry I
Date: 27 Jul 1999
Message-ID: <1dvlxmw.q7b6stj6x4wN@sdn-ar-001riprovp255.dialsprint.net>
Newsgroups: talk.bizarre
BornIn1700 <bornin1700 at aol.com> wrote:
Rimrunner, I'm looking for creative criticism ... not idiodicy.
Ah, CREATIVE criticism. I see. Let's try this, then.

Your poems are not the stuff of talk.bizarre;
They're pondorously long and often dull.
To me they seem below poetry's par,
Mundanely said with sentiments that stul-
tify the average reader's mind. Take note:
Your shopworn imagery should not be here.
Your ordinary poems have missed the boat.
You should away from here at once, I fear.

If poetry we want to here peruse
We'll look to Elspeth. That's to say: You lose.

-jwgh

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