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Subject: Re: 80%? place your vote....
From: "Jacob W. Haller" <spog at jwgh.org>
Date: Sat, 8 Mar 2003 09:03:44 -0500
Dante Alighieri <michel.angelo at heavens.gate> wrote:
On Fri, 7 Mar 2003 10:56:55 +0100, "Mateusz Józefowicz" <jozeusz at wp.pl> wrote::--)'poetry'
has rhyme and meter - that is how it differs from prose that has neither.
Oh, my bbbbbad, it has been redefined like the sports rules, like other things, to .......
This isn't bad for a first attempt, but you need to mix things up a little. Try:
poetry
has rhyme
and meter -
how
that is it differs
from
prose
that has
neither.
b
Oh my b b bad, it
b |
v
has
redefined <--------- been
|
v
* like the sports rules
* like other things
to .......
(I left out the initial smiley, as emoticons have NO PLACE in serious poetry, no matter WHAT size their noses are.)
HTH,
jwgh, certified sensitive poet
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